Adjusting to Marriage
It's seem that my view of point about adstment of marriage is begun to refinding of the identity from the seeing ofreal situation narriage. as you known well , it is not so easy to find "reasional-model" since every are different.
Anyway, if I were just-married couple, I would be fellow the adjustment of as below .
Firstly, I want to live near my office as possible as I can. The reason is l can save the times and bus fair.Besides, living in circule of the working- zone is very useful and benefit for my work . If my bride's has so long distance in traffic time than my office, I willing to move my house toward accaptale district area right away for my partner.
Though, l'm not a femmist, it is my thought that ' the child-care vacation is not only for women's duty but men;s responsibility. another words , it is depend on their situation they can chose. I also prefer to work in marriage-friendly job if I were a woman .
secondly , I will try to make the cooperationtime each others. Forstance , there are climbing mountains, playing tennis with my spouse. Generally say, matching to sleeping time is well known evident factors for ordinary marriage.
I hope to get a good relation with wifes relatives, friends and I want to introdeced by them.
conclusionly, adjestment of marriage means going to the harmony with complementlary doing each others.
Love is seeing toward one direction.
Monday, April 28, 2008
Adjusting to Marriage
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I can understand your opinion to marriage life through your writing. Specially your writing use well adverb to link sentences.However, I want to suggest several things by peer editing.First, according to my thought, because each paragraph were not divided by the type of adjustments of marriage. text could be complicated. Then, I thought it could be more good to put type of the adjustment on top of each paragraph.
Second, seperating of introduction, text and conclusion is not clear.
Third, I have some opinion to grammar about your text like below
- Anyway, if I were just-married couple, I would be follow the adjustment of as below.
- If my bride's has too long distance in traffic time than my office, I willingly move toward accaptale district area right away for my partner. - Though, l'm not a femmist, it is my thought that ' the child-care vacation is not only for women's duty but also men's responsibility.
- For instance , there are climbing mountains, playing tennis with my spouse.
- I hope to get a good relation with wifes relatives, friends
In conclusion, I could understand you trid to define adjustment of marriage through examples by your case.
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